17.1.06

beijing train



I wish that I could have taken a picture of them. Standing opposite me on the other side of the closed subway doors, they could have walked out of a Chagall painting. It was the way he held her: one arm draped over her shoulder cutting a diagonal line across her chest, his hands clasped together where her ribs tapered into her waist, enfolding her in an awkward embrace. Her curved back rests into his chest, hands hang limply at her sides, jutting out slightly where his arms hold her. She has blank innocent eyes, open wide yet downcast, filled with the kind of emptiness that can tell inexplicable stories. Her faintly highlighted hair falls in wispy layers about her pale round face above her purple coat. He is only slightly taller, dark hair curling slightly at the temple and above the forehead. His high-collared jacket is army green, and though he absently caresses her stomach, neither of them look at each other. My downcast eyes rest on the nubbly texture of her coat and the wrinkled green streak that cuts across purple. The train rumbles into the next station; they walk out of the open doors hand in hand.

1 Comments:

Blogger Cowboy Dan said...

You are amazing.

I've read your entire blog, every word. But I will not claim to have comprehended it all, at least not in any intellectual sense.

But it made me genuinely feel.

I view myself as clumsy at this moment. Words explain the behaviour and effects that indicate emotions, but honest emotion is something else entirely, something elusively understood and mystically incomprehensible.

I began wanting to describe the way you write as "delicate" in some way. I had started reading before I left home today, and the emotions held me as I rode the train. I really felt that the word "delicate" was in some way appropriate. But when I returned tonight and finished reading, I realized that I had mistaken something. Please pardon my expression, but your writing is so fucking strong.

I don't know how to react. Your vocabulary is obscene in its greatness. Your imagery complete. Your rhythm, your flow, jesus. I feel like I have to rely on expletives just to explain myself. It's just fucking exciting!

Ah, I am gushing. I am embarrassed at how you rule the planet.

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